Through hills and valleys it is seen to flow,with its natural uncertainity aglow.
Slides from high cliffs seem enthralling.
But a swirl in a small pit "appalling".
Such is life that is in entirety,
the truest epitome of uncertainity.
But never the less it is marvelous
once we learn to shift focus,
from the inate jeopardies
to the sceneries we glimpse.
2 comments:
well written Jaya
Hey hi. I just thought I'll drop this comment ! There are a few things that I'd like to point out ( for the dutiful feeling after having read ur last poem). It was a good poem but 3 things wud make ur blog better.
1) u dont need to look for rhyming finishes
2 ) plz edit ur profile description. ( time passes/flows. doesnt grow :P )
3 ) grammatically certain things might be taken care of. U dont need to give an adjective to an established phrase ( truest epitome.epitome by itself wud mean the best example. The best example doesnt need a certificate).It is nevertheless and not never the less.Its a word and not a phrase.
If i sound so irritable, I deeply apologise. But i thought if something can help u , it shud be done. Thanx fr a nice blog though :)
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